significantly improved Children draft complete
by Jo Rhett on May.05, 2011, under Observations
It’s oh-god-thirty but I’ve finished a new draft of Children of Another Star. I combined more scenes. I reduced point of view. And I added a lot more details here and there to help tie the story structure together. It’s a lot stronger now.
One more pass on editing for late night gotchas, and I’ll punch it out to readers.
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