Observations
significantly improved Children draft complete
by Jo Rhett on May.05, 2011, under Observations
It’s oh-god-thirty but I’ve finished a new draft of Children of Another Star. I combined more scenes. I reduced point of view. And I added a lot more details here and there to help tie the story structure together. It’s a lot stronger now.
One more pass on editing for late night gotchas, and I’ll punch it out to readers.
Jo Rhett
by Jo Rhett on Jul.01, 2010, under Observations
Author of Science and Speculative Fiction. Current pieces are the flash fiction piece Reality Fails, the short story Door of No Names and the novelette Children of Another Star.
I have lived in the San Francisco Bay Area for nearly 20 years now. I race motorcycles for fun.
I work for Tango as a Senior Operations Engineer. You can check out my latest resume if you wish.
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